Of course, since I'm an SEO and am never one to pass up an opportunity to leverage link bait, I asked Jason "Are you going to submit this to any social media sites? This would do really well." And I really thought it would--it was interesting, timely (the bracket was created right before the start of March Madness), easily digestible information. He said "Hold on, let me ask," and spent the rest of the day asking various people about whether the bracket was going to be submitted. Jason quickly found out that, simply via "dating Rebecca osmosis," he was the most knowledgeable social media person at the company. I'd gotten him hooked on Digg and reddit, so when he was going around asking people about submitting the bracket, he was met with confusing looks and head scratches.
Eventually, Jason got ahold of the person who handles SEO for the site but hasn't really done a lot of social media. She said that an employee had submitted the piece to Digg. I saw the submission and raised an eyebrow:
This isn't a good title and description. First of all, it makes it seem like the submission is just some random person's NCAA bracket picks, and why would the Digg community give a crap about that? Secondly, from a reputation management perspective, it doesn't really paint PayScale in a positive light. Linking to their content with a "Worst ever" title isn't exactly the best idea. This bracket is unique because it analyzes schools based on graduate salaries, so why misrepresent it and undersell the part that makes the content stand out?
Unsurprisingly, the submission didn't go anywhere. As of today it has 9 diggs. The employee who submitted it likely didn't have much experience submitting stories to Digg and isn't well-versed in crafting good titles and descriptions.
I recently found a couple more Digg submissions for the bracket:
This submission had the following issues:
- It didn't show a thumbnail, which would have given Digg users a sneak peek of the image.
- It pasted the URL in the description, which looks kind of spammy. The submission's title already links to the content, so there's no need to paste the URL in the description.
- "...average salary of school's grads" is grammatically incorrect. It insinuates that it predicts the winners based on one school's graduates. It's confusing, kind of boring, and disconnecting.
- It didn't properly capitalize the title. Sure, some submissions have made the home page with improper capitalization, but look at my RSS feed for stories that have gone hot:
All but two of the stories' titles are capitalized like proper headlines. I've highlighted the only two that aren't, and one of the stories is about Digg so it's probably likely to get some attention despite the inconsistent capitalization in the title. Capitalized titles are eye-catching--they're a headline, and headlines should grab your attention. Think about magazines on display at stores and newspaper headlines on the front page--they're big, they're bold, and they're capitalized.
Here's another submission:
Problems with this submission:
- It was submitted to the Lifestyle category, under Education. True, the chart may be educational to look at, but it's probably more interesting for people who are March Madness/NCAA fans and are familiar with the bracket system. If I showed this to my sister, she probably would have been like "Meh," whereas if I had showed the same bracket to my brother, a hardcore sports nut, he would have found it much more interesting. Thus, a submission to the Sports category would have probably been more appropriate and would have gotten more visibility from a more relevant audience.
- It's missing a thumbnail. Entice diggers with some eye candy and compel them to click through.
- It mentions "This article uses the median salary of users of PayScale.com who are 5 to 15 years into their careers." My eyes just glazed over while typing that. Yeah, it's a factual statement, but diggers aren't going to care. They don't know what PayScale is, and they don't care. They just want to see the bracket. If they have questions about how the bracket was compiled or what PayScale is, they'll ask in the comments. Don't overwhelm diggers from the get-go. A description should pique the user's interest and cause him or her (though we're dealing with Digg here, so it's probably "him") to click through.
This submission made the home page, and my boyfriend was given proper kudos at his office. :)
Here are some factors that helped:
- The user submitted the bracket to the Sports/Basketball category in order to leverage all of those college basketball fans.
- I also bugged him to submit before the Sweet 16 started because I didn't want the bracket to lose topical freshness.
- I crafted the title in the form of a question that would pique users' interests.
- I mentioned "March Madness" for topicality's sake and "Salary" to give an indication of what the content focused on.
- I simply pulled the bracket's snippet and used it as the submission's description, since it was pretty straightforward, yet simple.
- Lastly, the submitter used the actual bracket as a thumbnail so that users would see a teaser of the bracket.
The moral of this story is that you should really do a bit of research before you try and promote some linkbait. Poke around the social media site to get a feel for what typically works, what doesn't work, what patterns you notice, etc. Also, as I stated earlier, pick up a couple of magazines and newspapers and see how their headlines are crafted. For newsworthy stuff, look to a newspaper's front page and see how the information was presented in the title and opening paragraph. For a Top 10 list or something more entertainment-focused, check out Cosmopolitan magazine or something similar and look at their "X Ways to Pleasure a Man/X Ways to Trim 10 Pounds" headlines (hey, it's corny but it works).
Your title and description can often make or break your submission. Don't forget to extend these tips to your actual piece, too--if you write something interesting, give it a compelling, eye-catching title. In this age of attention deficit Internet users, sometimes you only get one shot to grab their attention.
I think the moral of the story here is that all things being equal, a good title and description can really be the deciding factor if your story gets popular or not. This isn't to say that crappy linkbait with an awesome title/caption will get popular (good title/caption != internet success), but if you're looking for success with social media you should make sure to cover all your bases.
I am commenting a lot today..
I would say the best point is that if you have all other things done correctly, that a power user is the key to getting it seen and successful.
You can have a perfectly titled post and decsription and still get only 10 votes if no one sees it. :(
Rebecca -
Spot on! My 4 diggs rules when submitting (that can be applied to other sb sites).
1. Good Title
2. Good Description
3. Thumbnail baby!
4. Correct category.
So funny when you see crappy / spammy submissions.
How awesome would it be to see a 16 seed (UT-Arlington) advance to an Elite Eight!!!
Great article, Rebecca. I think with the oversaturation of Digg & other social media sites with crap content these days (at least for longtime users), catchy titles make even more difference than they used to. I'm sick of the standard '8 best ways' or '9 things you can do' style submissions. This was a truly great title. Nice going.
I'm also sick of '8 best ways' submission style. But when I am looking at digg.com now, there is only one such news and only 5 with questions in the topic. Not so bad, then.
Seems to me this article isn't just about what you should put in your titles and descriptions, but also what you should not put in your titles and descriptions.
Aside from the overall length of the title, the title you created...
"How a Good Title and Description Can Make or Break Your Social Media Submission"
...seems much more attainable to the average reader than...
"How a Good Title, Description, and Strong Submission Record Can Make or Break Your Social Media Submission"
While it may seem obvious in this case to go with the shorter title, in many cases, we are hesitant to leave part of the article content out of the title (the title should summarize the article!!!).
Writers shouldn't try to be misleading, but, as Rebecca pointed out, they should try to pique the readers' interests. That's journalism 101, right?
There is a fine line between crafting a title that summarizes (and thus precludes the reader from clicking) and a title that teases (and thus draws the reader in).
Your friend sounds like a really nice guy ;)
He sure is!
Nice article Rebecca! A headline is your first impression. If it is boring, predictable, gives too much away or is grammatically incorrect forget it! I will gloss over that immediately. I actually caught your title on my iGoogle SEOmoz feed and thought "Hmmmm probably some good tips in that" -not to mention it was written by you which means it will be entertaining as well as informative;). Writing well is an art form and I hope valuable things such as headlines and excerpts will not get lost as our communication styles continues to shift.
Eesh, Cornell got a rough draw in this one. Would have made it to the Final Four if they had us in a different bracket.
Yeah, a lot of people pointed that out. :-/
A belated thumbs up to you Rebecca! Social Media Optimisation tips and tricks are always welcome...time to start working on becoming a power user on digg...
As far as the capitalization argument is concerned, had the same thing in the office regarding Page Titles, and the agreement was to use caps, as it looks more headliney.
Great article, Rebecca. One thing that I'd love to see is an overview of how this Digg submission is affecting business results at Payscale (or similar). For some businesses, social sites like Digg prove their value. For others, less so. Obviously, we all want more traffic to our sites. But if that traffic doesn't result in increased revenues and more satisfied customers, is Digg really worth it?
Keep up the great work.
P.S. You're so right. Kansas' 3 pointer at the end was amazing.
I know that the bracket brought PayScale a lot of links. It seemed to get passed around quite a bit. I don't really know if it led to more signups or conversions, though.
Nice post Rebecca. I've yet to make the digg homepage (I'm trying!) and this really helps.
Btw your bf better be treating you like a queen from now on. With YOU in his toolbelt, he'll be employee of the month all the time. Does he actually 'get' how valuable your help was?
Haha, he is. My young padawan is learning fast. ;)
Ah! So know I know the story behind the shout! I was wondering why you were so into March Madness and salary brackets. :)
Haha, I am into March Madness--that's nothing new. :)
Rebecca, thanks for sharing this. It's excellent advice.
Good article!
"Capitalized titles are eye-catching--they're a headline, and headlines should grab your attention."
After reading this I noticed you people actually capitalize all the YOUmoz posts for extra headline factor! But what about the amount of caps used?
"How a Good Title and Description Can Make or Break Your Social Media Submission" or "How a Good Title and Description can Make or Break your Social Media Submission" and why? The latter uses slightly less caps, which should emphasize the capped words more. Then again, the first one has more caps, thus could capture more attention. What are the opinions/rules on this?
Not too sure about the Internet world, but in the print world, the standard is either AP or Chicago style - both of which tend toward caps on all but articles, conjunctions, etc.
Thus, "How a Good Title and Description Can Make or Break Your Social Media Submission" is preferred.
Many print pubs, however, have gone to all caps in headlines, cover sell lines and banners.
That said - fabulous article! Thanks!
What a great article. I've been reluctant to do much with places like Digg simply because my knowledge level was so low. This gives me a great baseline from which to start. Thanks!
Great article and awesome points....it's crazy how a title and description can really have the biggest influence on your social media efforts. We knew this but never really thought too much on exactly how we worded it...not we'll definitely pay more attention.
Well i guess it is similar in all things no. If i gave you a book with a crappy title and no description. How inclined are you to jump in and give it an afternoon of your time.
Same goes for anything really.. Try this food without name or idea what it is... :)
Great, really informative article. I love it when I read an article (or comment) on seomoz that I learn so much from! And, just so you know, my eyes usually tend to glaze over when people talk about March madness.
Thanks!
How can your eyes glaze over? This year's championship game was crazy exciting--I can't believe Kansas hit that three at the end of regulation to tie.
Great post Rebecca - you should charge money for the specific gems in that second-to-last paragraph. Is it OK to re-submit the story to Digg or were you submitting a slightly different link?
Technically Digg won't accept dupe submissions from the exact same URL, so, uh... *cough*
Altering Links to submit to social media sites is a violation of the TOS. Do it and risk being banned..
So Rebecca... ShhhH!
Noted. I changed my answer to reflect Digg's TOS. :)
Appart from not even knowing what these brackets are, and the duplicate content submission issues on Digg, I don't agree with the capitalization argument.
I use a lot of brand names in titles, some of which are real words, which would totally dissolve into the rest of words of the title, failing to pique the interests of anyone.
Also, as a designer, capitalized titles look messy and needlessly heavy on the eye. Saying that capitalization draws attention doesn't make sense and seems disrespectful of people's reading habits. I look at a title based on the words, not the formatting.
There's an old adage in the design industry; never place style before substance...
Speaking of titles, you should remove the word "Good" from this article's unless there's an example where a good title hurts a submission.
The true moral of the story (in my opinion) is have a digg power user submit your post and spam all your friends with digg requests.
Yeah this part:
I didn't really want to risk submitting it myself--my strongest submission received 142 diggs but never got promoted--so I asked one of my friends who has a strong submission record to handle it.
Did stick out within this post (for me at least) because that was a factor in the success. While this is true, it's not the only reason. The title, description, and added thumbnail did play a part, probably a very big part.
Being submitted by a Digg power user helped considerably, but the advice in this post still holds quite true. The details can, and will make or break many a social media campaign.
Nope, I disagree. I've seen a bunch of stuff get submitted by power users that got a ton of spam votes, only to get buried as soon as they hit the home page and the masses saw the content for what it was. Sure, spamming and power users work some of the time, but not all of the time--if it did, every power user would have a 100% success rate because all he'd have to do is spam his friends for votes and his stories would get promoted every time.
I mean to say that all of the above were factors, and I even forgot to include the content in that bundle as well, but for whatever reason I wasn't given an edit button on that comment...
Fred, I was replying to Kurt's message, not yours. :D
I would not agree..
A power Digg user definitely gives the content the visibility it needs but you have to have quality content and good Title/Description.
The Moral of the story is do it right and don't be a slacker.
Telling your friends about something you have done and are proud of is part of being friends.
Cheers