Landing pages rule. Blah.
Homepages suck. Blah.
Do some A/B testing. Blah.
Base your optimization strategy on customer feedback. Blah.
All of those statements are true. But they sound boring and being boring is lame. It's twenty fourteen and I refuse to be lame.
If you want to be a non-lame marketer, it's really easy. Read this post, have a laugh, and treat everything I say as gospel.
Be warned, however, that I may descend into telling bad jokes in the absence of witty metaphor and charming anecdotal rhetoric.
The experienced adult readers amongst you might remember that "Shit. The condom broke!" moment. Yeah you do. You might also remember that it felt like a good time to run a test. #STDsArentFunny. Perhaps. But, as we go through this epic journey together today, I'll show you exactly when and how you should really be testing.
But first. The best 7-part list of bullet points you'll ever read.
The start of the best part of your day begins now with this table of contents:
- First I'll give you the only rationale you'll ever need to explain why landing pages are to marketers, what Immodium is to an astronaut with diarrhea. Essential.
- I'll prove why context - not content - is king when it comes to conversion.
- Following that, I will make you fall in love with forms. FYI, it's really, really hard to make form love a "thing".
- Mid way through we'll sip some Canadian Club, get our Don Draper on, and learn how to write copy like the Mad Men (and Women).
- "Paint me a pretty picture Johnny!" "Screw you mommy. Design is not just rainbows and unicorns!"
- Is it greedy to want a second helping when you're an orphan? Not if you have my name. (It's Oliver in case you're confused). Always ask for more when it comes to conversion .
- And finally, I'll put my art critic hat on and rip into some landing page examples, both good and bad.
Challenge laid down. Challenge accepted (on your behalf).
Chapter 1: Why landing pages rule, and why you should never send campaign traffic to your homepage
If I've got your attention thus far, it's probably because you can't bear to tear your eyes away from my enchanting prose.
The only important word in that sentence is ATTENTION.
Attention is a state of mind that you can't assume your visitors will even enter if you don't give them the right conversion experience.
A good conversion experience is one in which your visitors are compelled to pay attention and ultimately interact with your conversion goal - clicking the Call-To-Action (CTA).
A bad conversion experience is one in which your visitor is compelled to run away.
There are three sides to attention that we need to consider:
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Capturing your visitor's attention
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Maintaining your visitor's attention
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Focusing your visitor's attention
Your ad covers point #1, and landing pages are the answer to solve numbers 2 and 3, so let's start with number 2.
Genius Insight #1: attention ratio
Pay attention as I set the scene.
Let's say you're running a marketing campaign for a promotion:
"50% off Miley Cyrus Twerkout* DVDs"
* I'm claiming a ™ on that brilliant piece of branding.
Got your attention, right?
Well, let's see. What is attention ratio?
With that in mind, consider the two diagrams below. The first is a typical homepage, and the second is a campaign specific landing page.
The Homepage
On this homepage, your Twerkout campaign is represented by "promo 2" highlighted by the red circle.
The rest of the page is comprised of a few other Miley promotions, some tour dates, navigation, a general brand proposition about how Hanna Montana is no longer a thing, a photo slider, footer navigation and many other page "leaks".
If you send people to your homepage - from a paid ad, email or social media - the intended campaign conversion goal has to fight to get their attention with all of the other interactive elements on the page.
A typical homepage has approximately 40 links.
In the example opposite there is actually a total of 56 links, therefore:
The attention ratio is 56:1
#puke
Hey, don't just take my word for it. This overstimulus has impacted many other people's lives according to Princeton University wuuut!
Princeton neuroscientists found out the more stuff you have around you, the more each piece of stimulation competes for "neural representation"--that is, your attention.
Back to our scientific marketing experiment. Let's now consider the Twerkout promotion on a dedicated, campaign-specific landing page.
The Landing Page
On a campaign-specific landing page, the entire page is focused on only one thing, the Twerkout DVD campaign.
The messaging is very tightly related to the campaign goal and has only 1 interactive element - the CTA.
The attention ratio is 1:1
#slapmyassandcallmemileythatsgood
Let's look at an example of someone doing this right. Salesforce is a company with an incredibly complex product offering. Their website is a cacophony of possible pathways.
If you dig deep into the site, their primary goal seems to be to get you signed up for a product demo. Not surprising given the complexity of their software.
So what happens when you search for Salesforce in Google? The first organic result will take you to the homepage. But the first paid ad (right at the top of the page) takes you to a different page entirely. Presumable because you typed in their name and are showing a level of prior knowledge.
The page you arrive at looks like this:
It's a great landing page. Entirely focused on a single goal. To get you to watch a demo of any of their products. The headline and CTA could use a bit more mention of the purpose of the page (watching a demo). Also, take a look at the button. It's the same colour as the form container. DON'T DO THAT! Use some contrast Salesforce.
Aside from those things, it's a really nicely designed, focused experience.
One last example. Where would you look/click in this situation?
How about now?
Got it? Never feed your marketing traffic to a peacock, unless you've poked his eyes out.
The feather ones, not his actual eyeballs! Wow, you're sick.
Genius Insight #2: conversion coupling
You are now 50% of the way to being smarter than 98% of all marketers.
Synergy. That's what I'm talking about. Uck. What a gross word.
Here's the second piece of most of almost everything you need to know to be the cleverest person in the room at any marketing conference. Try saying that fast.
In more detail it's comprised of one or more of the following:
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Message match: Matching the copy of your ad to the headline of your landing page.
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Design match: Matching the design of your display ad to the design on your landing page.
Let's look at the good and the bad of them.
Message match
To expand, message match is the idea of matching the pre-click message to the post-click message on your landing page, with the goal of making people think they made a "good click".
The messaging on the page reinforces the reason for their click, reducing/removing confusion.
Here's an ad for a startup I'll be working on after Unbounce:
If that link sent you to a homepage, the target headline may look something like this:
Get More Projects Done With Less Management
This may or may not be a good headline for expressing the brand value proposition, but it doesn't match the ad at all. Result? Bad message match.
The correct headline in this instance would be:
Project Management Software Without Deadlines
Result? It matches the headline of the ad perfectly, and thus it's great message match. Ding, ding, ding. Got it?
To build really strong message match, use the subhead of your landing page to reiterate the main point of your ad's description.
This example introduces aspects of a concept called conversation momentum, which I'll get to in part 2. But basically you can see that the subhead repeats the end of the ad description "Deadlines are dead." and finishes the sentence like people do when they're in the gushy part of a relationship "Choose procrastination instead".
And it rhymes. #doublerainbow
Here are some good and bad examples of message match from the Google
Carrying on the thread, I searched for "Project management software for teams".
Here's what I found:
Excellent match for the headline and the form header (Try it Free >> Try Smartsheet For Free).
Let's do that again:
There's no message match here. I was expecting "Project Management Software" and I got "DIY Custom Apps For Improving Team Productivity."
Not to mention the attention ratio, which is a whopping 35:1 not including the 40 links in drop-down menus.
Take a look at the page if we remove all of the distractions:
So much better! The Attention Ratio is 1:1 and it's much clearer what you're supposed to do.
And, going back to the ad:
Why shorten "management" to "mgmt" just to throw both Intuit AND Quickbase in there? To me, that's brand overload. I like to think of paid ads that are not based on a branded search as needing an application of " Message Before Brand." Your brand experience will be introduced after they sign up or through the communication of your page copy. Throwing your name in the ad can waste precious space with a name that people might not be familiar with.
Now I say this based on most companies that don't have a pervasive brand that could benefit from this tactic. If however you are doing TV ads and a lot of other brand exposure work, then this could be a beneficial tactic to catch people's eye. But I'd rather add 2-3 more value based words in the headline and relegate the brand name to the 2nd or 3rd row of the ad.
Sidenote: I would love to know some results of this level of branding in paid ads if someone has tested it.
I dare you to search for something that is of importance to your life and do a clickathon. The experiences are shockingly shocking.
So that's message match!
Boom. Insights. You're so lucky to be reading this. Next.
Design match
This is one of the easiest techniques to master. Take the design on your display (banner) ad and repeat it on your landing page.
Deep breath.
This time I'll start with the good side of the force. Example courtesy of RBC Canada via Facebook.
The Facebook ad:
The landing page:
Not only is the message match perfect (100% perfect - can perfect be less than 100%?), the design match also kicks ass. That little dude is following you around with his little sign, letting you know he cares.
HOWEVER. Take a look at the landing page in detail, the page does suffer from Attention Ratio deficiencies (7:1) and the CTA is horribly small. If you did a squint test (squint your eyes from a distance and see what stands out on the page) - you'd see the trust seal, not the CTA.
To improve this, the different options for applying for an account could be on the next page after the click has confirmed interest.
And the CTA would be a lot clearer if it was designed to be bigger with a strongly contrasting button color.
Brain break! Go smoke, pee, or text your life partner. I'll wait 'til you're back.
Chapter 2: Context is king, queen, emperor, and boss
The more testing I do the more I keep coming back to one central concept. Context. In this section I'll show you a few examples of context in action.
But first, a couple of definitions with names that I invented. #yourewelcome #payattention.
2.1 Conversation momentum
The purpose of Conversation momentum is to remove the break in communication that can occur when the click is made. If you're wooing someone in an email or blog post, it makes sense to continue to do so on the landing page.
You wouldn't invite someone into your house then act like you had never met them would you?
A big portion of this concept is respect. Respecting the click, respecting the time you want your visitor to invest.
Imagine this line is in your email.
"Let me show you how our product/service can help."
Sometimes a good way to preserve momentum is to express gratitude to your visitor for showing up.
"I'm glad you were interested in learning more about {words that were on the link}."
Creating a delightful experience humanizes the relationship and shows you care.
It's important to get to the point quickly (like a short email), but you should do so in a way that flows naturally.
"One of the important things to know about {words in the link} is that it can {establish the benefit}."
Getting warmer.
"What our solution does is to make {words in link} much easier to do. If you want to take it for a spin, I'll pay the first month for you. And I'm personally available if you fancy a chat about the best way to use it."
How yummy is that?
Now consider the lame-o, commonplace, and rude approach:
"Let me show you how our product/service can help."
"We're the best {what we do} in the world. Sign Up Now."
What? You stopped caring about me, and now you sound generic and only interested in yourself.
Conversation Momentum Case Study - Ecourse to landing Page
To show how conversation momentum works in action, take a look at the CTA in the top-right corner of the page below.
Establishing context
This page is from an 11-part course about landing page optimization, primarily written by me. It's driven by an email drip campaign where I speak to people in a very personal way. So anyone who is on a course page has received between 2-13 emails from me. My mugshot is also in the sidebar of every page.
Sidenote: The course is now ungated (no form) so there are no more emails. But up until this point there were.
At first I was sending this traffic to a rather generic landing page that has our standard value proposition headline:
The conversion goal of this page was a simple click on the orange call to action.
To improve the sense of context, I made three changes to the page design, producing the version below:
The changes were:
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A co-branded header. The idea here is represent the before and after of the experience. You came from the ecourse, expressed interest in Unbounce, and are now having Unbounce presented to you.
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A conversational headline that again connects with where you came from and introduces the purpose of the page.
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A personal message from me (the familiar face of the ecourse).
The result? a 77% lift in conversions.
2.2 Context of use
Context of use can be defined as providing a visual demonstration of how your product or service will be used by a customer.
And I can't underline strongly enough how important it is for conversion. Actually I can - how important it is for conversion << that's not a link.
Here's an example:
Think of that guy Vince from the Slap Chop and ShamWow commercials. Annoying? Definitely. A role model for your children? Absolutely not. Excellent illustrations of context of use? Mos def.
You know exactly how to use them and what the outcome and experience will be like.
That's context of use. Check out this next case study:
Context of use case study - landing page templates
We all know that research is key when beginning an A/B test. It can tell you when you're delivering the wrong marketing message, and it provides insight into opportunities that could change your business.
So, I did some research.
I wanted to know how people were interpreting and reacting to the landing page templates page on Unbounce.com, so I added a Qualaroo survey widget to the page to ask a simple question:
What do you think of our templates?
- They look great: [ text box for extra info ]
- I don't understand how to use them: [ text box for extra info ]
- They don't meet our needs: [ text box for extra info ]
I ran this survey for about two months, and received 1,771 responses.
Analyzing these responses I spotted 3 consistently recurring questions from the freeform text entry fields that appeared when you submit a response.
The most common questions were:
- How much do the templates cost?
- Where can I download them?
- Can I use them in Wordpress?
Wuuuuut?! They exist inside the Unbounce product. You can't buy them, you can't download them, and you certainly can't use them with Wordpress!
Epic fail followed by big opportunity.
Clearly visitors (a large portion of whom were arriving via organic search), were getting an entirely incorrect impression from this page. They didn't understand the context within which you can use the templates.
How do you fix a broken experience like this?
First, let's take a look at the original page:
Templates right?
Sure, but for what? In what? How much what?
When someone arrives on your landing page, the first thing they do is to look around and subconsciously ask for help.
"I know why I came here, but I'm not sure where I am or what this is."
Your job as a business, is to understand the mindset of your potential customers when they arrive at your landing page, and communicate appropriately.
In this instance, like I said, there are a large number of organic search visitors showing up who have absolutely zero context. They searched for "landing page templates" and are thinking about templates and templates alone - not restrictions of where or how they can be used.
To answer the questions of these visitors, we created a two-step diagram to illustrate context of use:
The context of use we designed for this circumstance worked as follows:
- You can view the template library in the app when you choose to build a new landing page.
- When you choose a template, you are taken to the page builder where you can customize and edit it.
Test results
Page A [Control] - No context of use
The conversion rate for people who see the templates page is 2.1%.
Page B [Treatment] - With context of use diagram
The conversion rate of people who saw the new version of the page was 3%, a conversion rate lift of +43%.
EPIC WIN! 43% Conversion Lift in New Account Trial Starts
A really impressive result. But this type of number is thrown around all the time. What does it actually mean to a business? What is the impact on revenue?
Impact on Revenue
To figure out the affect this win had on the business I took into account all of the relevant numbers.
- Additional new trial starts (NTS) per month due to this test -- 120
- NTS over 12 months -- 1440
- Average lifetime value of a customer -- $706
Incremental impact on revenue based on a year of extra acquired customers:
1,440 x $706 = $1,016,640
That's what happens when you help visitors to understand where they are and how the world works while they are there.
Chapter 3: How to make friends forms and influence people
"I f**#ing hate forms! They ruin everything." -- Denis Suhopoljac
That was the reaction from our art director the last time we designed some landing page templates.
Unfortunately, forms are a landing page staple, and because they represent your conversion goal, your ability to understand their nuances is the key to success.
You should remember this statement:
Friction is the barrier to entry (effort) that your form presents to your visitors. Friction falls into two categories and has one solution:
3.1 Perceived Friction
This is the shock factor of suddenly being faced with a long form. The perception of having to fill out such a long form can be daunting and cause people to change their mind. A solution to this can be to either shorten the form or split your form over more than one page.
3.2 Actual Friction
This is the time and trouble it takes to actually *fill in* the form, and it can cause pretty serious abandonment issues if it's not considered. Things that can slow down - or cause frustration during - the process of form completion include:
- Too many open-ended questions that people have to think about.
- Dropdown menus that don't include a viable option for the visitor. An example of this is the commonly asked "What industry is your business in?". If there isn't an answer available and you don't provide a way out (like an "Other industry" option) then frustration can occur.
- Captcha security input fields. This is when you have to read strange looking words or letters and type in what you think they say in order to proceed. Anyone not hate those?
3.3 The solution: reducing friction with conversion lube
You probably thought that was a passing reference. Nope. Conversion lube is whatever you can give to your visitor to ease the transaction.
Method One: Ask the data for help
One approach to improvement is to analyze the results you get and adapt your form accordingly. When looking at your form data, ask yourself:
- Are a high percentage of dropdown results the first option in the list? If so, you should try to make the answers as short and clearly distinguishable as possible. If people can easily/quickly read the option that applies to them without lots of hunting/scrolling, they will be more inclined to select it.
- Are the responses to open-ended questions actually real answers? Or are they nonsense (such as "asdfasdf") designed to get through the form as quickly as possible? If so, you should make the questions more direct and easier to answer. Examples would be: "Tell us about your biggest marketing problem" (requires a short story as an answer) vs. "What is the biggest barrier to your marketing success?" (which could often be answered in a few words like "Not enough traffic.").
Method Two: Apply some balance
"The prize" is the incentive you offer up in exchange for personal data. Your goal is to balance the size of the prize with the amount of friction.
There are many incentives for a user to give up their personal information: Digital documents: Ebook/whitepaper/report, webinars, newsletters, consultations for professional services, discount coupons, contest entries, free trials, product launch notifications.
The rule here is: Don't be greedy.
Only ask from your visitors what you would be willing to give up if the roles were reversed.
Okay, be a little more greedy than that, but not much.
For instance, if you will be sending an automated newsletter to registrants, email or email/name are all that's needed. Whereas if you have a product/service that requires a follow-up sales call, you would want more information to qualify the level of interest, and sometimes extra friction can actually help to remove the looky loos from your funnel and improve lead quality. Like I said, it's a balancing act.
When in doubt, don't get ahead of yourself. Remember that you should always start by asking for a kiss before trying to take it a step farther.
I just got a sad feeling.
I don't think I've done enough to make you fall in love with forms.
You should take a trundle over to this page where it'll all fall into place.
How to design the ultimate lead gen form
Now we've covered some of the theory behind forms, you might be wondering exactly how to go about creating a rockstar form. We can do this by designing our form as if it's the only thing we're allowed to put on our page.
Your form consists of the following elements:
- A headline to introduce the reason for the form
- A description with bullets to highlight the benefit and contents of what you're giving away upon completion
- The form with descriptive form fields (original label names and questions can capture attention)
- A Call-To-Action
- Trust statements or links
- A closing urgency or context-enhancement statement
Below is a sketch of how a form designed using this method might look:
How was that? All loved up on forms? Not yet?
Maybe we need some real examples. Below are some examples of lead gen landing pages (#withforms) that I happen to like.
The short and sweet signup form
The ebook download form
The request a callback form floating over a guy's crotch
The super-long form with a happy guy at the end
#formlove
Chapter 4: The Mad Men pitch - writing copy that converts
Your words are the first thing people pay attention to when the page loads, and the last thing they read before deciding whether or not they will complete your conversion goal.
You would be a mad man (or woman) not to heed this next piece of advice.
Of course, that's an exaggeration; you should at least spend 5% of your time writing the body copy of your landing page, but that grandiose statement should at least give you a sense of the relative importance of page elements when it comes to conversion rate optimization. For this reason, I'm going to stick to these two elements (headline and CTA) and try to get you outta here before the bell rings.
Start with your headline
Chances are you've had to go for a job interview at some point. Either that, or you're an entrepreneur begging to be heard by either potential customers or potential investors.
Regardless, the most and ONLY important thing when you start a conversation with someone, is to get your foot in the door.
That's what your headline does.
If you can write a headline interesting and useful enough to hold someone's attention, you've got your foot in the door of conversion. Now that you're in the elevator, you have those precious extra seconds to communicate/pitch your idea.
Copywriter Roberta Rosenberg offers this sage piece of advice:
" Your headline has one job and one job only. To get your visitors to continue engaging with your message, increase their desire for what you're offering, and motivate a Call-To-Action click.
That's why when it comes to crafting effective landing page headlines, choose clarity over clever.
Clever calls attention to itself at the expense of the message.
Clarity smooths the way to conversion."
I can verify the part about clarity over clever. Whenever we A/B test email subject lines, the clear version beats the funny or clever one. Stupidly, we still carry on testing them ;)
There's an art to crafting an effective headline, but there are also some techniques and formulas you can lean on to help you get started.
To be very clear though. These are formulas for the construction of writing, not formulas for success - because there are no formulas for success. If there were, I'd be sitting behind a diamond studded Macbook Pro, eating beef jerky and telling stories about eating beef jerky while being successful…
Point being. Use these constructs to do exactly that. Construct your headline. The success depends entirely on your idea plus your will and enthusiasm.
So back to the writing:
Joanna Wiebe from Copyhackers suggests these headline writing formulas:
The Only Way to [Do Something Desirable] Without [Doing Something Undesirable]
The Only Way to Turn Off the Lights Without Clapping or Getting Out of Bed
[Do Something Hard] in [Period of Time] or [Promise]
Tune Your Piano in 15 Minutes or "Piano Tuner App" Is Free
[Do Something Desirable] Like [an Expert] Without [Something Expected & Undesirable]
Learn to Play Chess Like Bobby Fischer - Without Any of the Crazy!
They're not going to work for everything, but they will get you thinking.
I often like to write the landing page value proposition as a sequence of 3 headlines split throughout the page, like a classic story arc of beginning, middle, and end.
- The main headline
- The reinforcement statement
- The closing argument
You can construct your story like this:
Statement of uniqueness
Backed up with a supporting statement to establish credibility
Expand on the experience
And explain how you solve a pain point
Close with urgency to encourage a call-to-action click
For example, if you are advertising a luxury resort in Costa Rica (cos like, we all do that right?), your 3 part headlines might read something like this:
The Only Luxury Rainforest Retreat in Costa Rica
Dedicated to preserving our wild jungle paradise
Indulge Your Senses in Our Hot Spring Jungle Spa
Without the crowds and distractions of the large tourist resorts
Escape to Costa Rica for a Luxury Experience in One of the World's Last Remaining Rainforests
What this does is provide big bold statements for people who are quickly scanning your page.
You can see how it's broken down in the screenshot below:
And don't bother asking where the Pura Vida resort is.
I made it up.
You're welcome.
Now write your call to action (CTA)
As Mr. Draper and I pointed out earlier, your CTA is of prime importance because it represents the final tipping point between the success and failure of your campaign.
To click, or not to click. That is the question.
You can break a CTA down into many factors, such as:
- Description (being explicit about what I'll get)
- Actionable phrasing (using verbs like 'get')
- Possessives (choosing 'my' vs. 'your')
- Subtext (supporting information)
- Urgency (a reason to act now)
To expand on that. I'll rattle off a paragraph of words that you should memorize while holding your breath:
Every time you add a button to your landing page you need to write down exactly what will happen when the button is clicked, then write those words on the button. It should be specific and driven by the desire to click it. Add words like 'Get' at the start to amplify the fact that you will get something by clicking it. Use 'my' instead of 'your' to personalize the connection. Tell people how long they have to click the button to encourage them to do it NOW! And provide extra context and detail in subtext either inside the button or as an addendum beneath it.
Here's an example call-to-action based on these 5 factors:
Breaking the button apart you can see how the components work together in beautiful harmony.
- Description: "Get My Free SaaS Project Management Guide" - Describes what you'll get by clicking.
- Actionable phrasing: "Get" - Describes that you will receive something.
- Possessives: "My" - Personalizes it.
- Subtext: "A quick 5 minute read with 10 top tips!" - Lends extra benefit to the offer as it's easily digestible.
- Urgency: "Every day you don't implement these tips you're losing productivity and money" - Connects with the pain of your prospect and how the offer will help them more if they get it now.
Okay, I get the structure, now how do I write the CTA copy?
Michael Aagaard from ContentVerve.com recommends asking yourself 2 questions in order to optimize your call-to-action copy:
- What is my prospect's motivation for clicking this button?
- What is my prospect going to get, when he/she clicks this button?
Genius takeaway number 412:
A call-to-action that conveys the value of your offering and its relevance to your prospect will lead to more conversions.
Whoa there, horsey!! You need to resist the "Let's just test 10 different CTAs" syndrome. I've been there and it's dangerous. Your CTA is also one of the most sensitive and impactful places to play, both in the positive and negative directions.
So take heed of this next section.
Unexpected CTA conversion killers: the power of negative suggestion
Something I see a lot of (and something I highly recommend) is subtext beneath a button. A little horse whisper to encourage the click. These can range from privacy statements to special offer reinforcements.
However, there is a certain type of statement that you want to avoid at all cost.
I'm talking about the "insert a negative word that I wasn't even thinking of" type of statement.
Consider this scenario. You've filled in a form and are about to click the button, when all of a sudden, your eye sees the word SPAM! Albeit in a well meaning way: "We will never spam you."
"But I wasn't thinking about spam until you pointed it out! Now I have 'cause to pause™.' "
Man, I'm getting good at trademarking awesome terms!
What this does is place a seed of doubt in people's minds at exactly the wrong time.
In an A/B test performed by Michael Aagaard, the inclusion of the word spam bombed conversion rates by 18.7%.
Another example is shown below where the phrase "No Gimmicks" is written right beneath the CTA.
I don't think I've used the word "gimmick" in a sentence in years. Yet now it's playing in my head and I'm wondering why I'm having second thoughts.
Removing the word "Gimmicks" resulted in a 25% lift in conversions!
Be careful how you supplement your CTAs, and please, please, please, test any changes to avoid an unexpected dip in conversions. I've been there and it sucks trying to figure out why your business is suddenly experiencing a negative reaction to something you can't explain.
Chapter 5: Design theory in 3 minutes
Remember little Johnny from the intro? Don't get me wrong, I like unicorns and rainbows as much as the next guy - especially double ones. But they have their place.
When people think that design is just pretty pictures. It twangs my sciatic nerve.
As the bloke who's seen more landing pages than anyone on the planet, I've seen my fair share of design trainwrecks. Designs that are so offensive that for some sadistic reason, I love them more than the good ones.
I love critiquing landing pages because it engages my altruistic side. It's the design equivalent of puppy rescue or freeing Willies.
Oh, right, I said 3 minutes. Okay, let me give you some Conversion Centered Design theory in 150 seconds. Go.
As I mentioned at the beginning of the post, design is all about attention.
Your ad captures attention, your headline maintains attention, and your page design focuses attention. As such, your goal with design is to draw attention to the most important element(s) on the page.
Read faster dammit!
Principle #1 - Directional cues
There's no doubting the power of the image below. It's an iconic example of the power of directional cues. Uncle Sam is not only staring right into your soul, but he's pointing at you to reinforce the word "YOU". Or "Me" from a more user-centric perspective.
Here's another example, this time from the UFC:
And an example from a brick-and-mortar business:
And an example on a landing page (remember why we're here, Oliver).
As you can see, they leave you in no doubt as to what the purpose of the page is.
The secret is to *combine* design elements so that once you've shown people the way via directional cues, the place where you're pointing also has clarity of communication.
There's no point in having the president of your chess club invite people over for a game of Monopoly. The carpet doesn't match the drapes.
Principle #2 - Encapsulation
You can think of encapsulation as creating a window on your landing page where your CTA is the view. It's most effective when used to highlight a form #formlove!
Check out the landing page below. What stands out? The form. How hard was that? Pretty damn hard if you look at most people's lead gen pages.
It's easy. Just wrap it up...
"If you like it then you shoulda put a ring on it" -- Beyonce Knowle
Principle #3 - Contrasting colours (Hey, I'm Canadian, we use u's)
Unless you live in a hole, you'll have read about a boat load of button colour A/B tests. Red is best, green is for go, orange is inviting. Horse excrement. All of it.
It's as easy as this: Look for the dominant hue of your page, and pick its complement for your CTA. You can see it applied twice in the previous example, where the form container is in very stark contrast to the page and the button then contrasts with that.
If you need help with contrasting colours, check out this colour wheel from Tiger Color Lab:
Find your dominant hue and look opposite.
The photo below - which I took on the summit of a barren hill during a lightning storm in Yellowstone - illustrates the power of contrast to suck in your vision.
In the interest of bringing Canada and the U.S. even closer together, here's the word "colour" written as "color". #borderlove
Principle #4 - White space
Space things out. And because you can use any colour you like, not just white, it's not as racist a name as it seems. Maybe we should say add gaps. There you go. Gaps.
Look at the photo below:
Your eye is free to wander, floating over the image, until it rests on the subject. The Elk in the lower right corner. And then you go "Ahhhhh."
In landing page terms, I like the next one for it's clarity (but it suffers from terrible attention ratio).
Two Columns, a smiley face and lots of gappage. You always need content, but that doesn't mean you can't space it out.
And now this:
"You found it!"
Yes I did. By searching for "worst landing page ever." #truestory
Add some gaps, people.
What I mean by that is that by applying these Conversion Centered Design principles, you are focusing attention on your call-to-action. This makes it easier to spot how strong or weak your CTA copy really is. After all, there's no point in drawing attention to something that's inherently lame.
Chapter 6: Please, Internet, I want more conversions
Get this. I'm at a wedding in London in the 70s. I'm 4. My mother turns to the person next to her after noticing I'd wandered away from the table. "I should go grab him!" she says. "Let him play" is the reply.
A moment later, another lady at the table says, "Look at that boy on the stage!" - pointing at a kid standing up there, hands held out in front of him in a bowl shape - "he should be called Oliver."
"He is!!!" my Mother replies looking horrified.
That actually happened. No word of a lie. I'll give you my mum's phone number.
Told you there would be charming anecdotes.
What's my point? Isn't it enough that you're all like "I'm listening to Oliver Twist's life story!"?
I'll make it easy for you. You should behave like you are Oliver Twist (me), and ask for something more after every conversion.
When you acquire a lead - when someone fills in your form - the results you can get by asking for more will blow your mind. Or refill your bowl of gruel.
Your marketing doesn't end with a conversion. Where there is intent there is opportunity.
Post-Conversion Marketing (PCM)
The act of asking for - and getting - more from your leads, is known as post-conversion marketing. It's the process of continuing the conversation with your new lead on the confirmation page they see after filling out your form.
PCM in action - What should you do?
Imagine this scenario in your head brain.
Dude fills out your form to download an ebook about snowboard designs. You say, "Thanks dude! If you like that ebook about snowboard design, you should come watch our live demonstration of 3D printing snowboard design transfers!"
That scenario can be applied to almost any online business model. You establish interest, then you prompt for a subsequent interaction.
How to use confirmation pages to double your lead gen potential
Here's a quick and easy case study for you that you can copy to give an instant boost to your lead gen numbers.
We changed the thank-you page for our webinar registration landing pages from asking for a social share, to asking people to subscribe to our blog newsletter.
Here's the confirmation page in question:
2,500 people registered for the webinar, and of those 40% subscribed to the blog! That's 1,100 extra blog subscribers just by adding a CTA to the confirmation page of a webinar lead gen form.
Here's another example of a great confirmation page. In this example, Derek Halpern engages in a conversation and asks people to do 1 or 2 optional tasks. Remember, all you need to do is ask, and you will get some post-conversion conversions.
That's smart post-conversion marketing! Go do it yourself.
Chapter 7: The art critic - 4 honest landing page critiques
Now that you're a pro landing page optimizer, I'm going to rip into a few bad landing pages so you can see where people are going wrong. To be helpful, I'll also make suggestions for how to make them more effective.
Here's a B2C example search that most of you will be familiar with:
The ad is a great match for the search query so we're firmly on a positive scent trail. Now take a look at the resulting landing page:
Wow. What a train wreck! We have three magic words here. "next", "day", "delivery". Take a look around. The word "next" only appears once on the page and it's so hidden (top-right corner) that the chances of you finding it are absurdly low.
Attention ratio: Over 120:1
Conversion coupling: "Next day flower delivery" >> "Flowers, Plants and Gifts." Zero message match.
If you decide to stay on this site you're going to have to do a lot of work to find what you want.
So how would we go about fixing this broken experience? Take a look at the wireframe below:
Now that's a simple landing experience. You're probably wondering why there are 5 CTAs giving an attention ratio of 5:1. Why am I breaking my own rules?
I'm using this example because ecommerce presents a different type of problem and the solution needs to be altered to address this particular circumstance.
The reason why this is a good approach is that there is still a single goal on the page - each CTA represents exactly the same action. The difference here is that you are now segmenting by category while maintaining the goal of the page - to get next day flower delivery.
Breaking down the page, you can see that the search scent is maintained as the headline matches the search query and ad copy perfectly, creating great Conversion coupling. As soon as you arrive on this page, you know you are in the right place.
The subhead backs up the value proposition of the headline, and the question above the flower categories explains the purpose of the CTAs. Once you've selected your category you would be pushed through to the category page on the website so you can select the flowers you want to order.
Isn't that a delightful experience? And it's so bloody simple there's no reason not to deliver a page like this to the people who click on your ads.
This can translate to virtually any ecommerce situation.
How about a search for "iPad keyboards"?
If you look at the display URL you can probably guess what's about to happen. #ISmellHomepage
OMFG shoot me now! Why would you do that?! That is the epitome of disrespecting my click and my time.
Fixing this is just as easy as it was last time. Have a headline that says "Ipad Keyboards" and then have a selection of thumbs for the top selling keyboards that click through to a shopping cart page.
Remember, ecommerce landing pages are one of a few exceptions for attention ratio if and only if you maintain a single goal - to buy/order one of a selection of the same thing.
How about an organic search result?
Consider the following search and resulting organic result:
The first goes to a blog post which is helpful, but you need to read or scroll through the post to find a link to the guide, and it suffers from attention ratio problems due to main and secondary navigation.
The second result points to a landing page as shown below:
That's a perfect landing experience. Fine, it's a page that I put together but you can see why it would be effective.
I'm showing this page to demonstrate another scenario where you'd use more than one CTA. The goal of both is the same - to download the ebook. However, the content marketing strategy here is designed to allow alternative social currencies with which to pay for the ebook . First there is the standard email approach which gathers a lead for you. The second is to pay with a tweet.
The purpose of the pay with a tweet option is to let people who are wary of giving up their email get the ebook. At the same time, the goal for the author of the book is to create momentum for the campaign.
Every time a tweet goes out you have the potential to get more people coming back to the page - creating a momentum loop. Clever right?
What isn't clever is that I neglected to include any social proof on this page. For an ebook, you'll want to do a search on your social networks to see if anyone tweeted about the ebook. You can then either use that as a testimonial or reach out to the person directly to ask for a more in depth one.
Here's a search for "SEO research tools":
The corresponding landing page looks like this:
At first glance it looks like a good landing page. However, breaking it down you can see that:
- The message match is pretty terrible. It doesn't repeat the ad at all.
- The goal of the page is to download an ebook which wasn't what I was looking for.
- The attention ratio is pretty great. I'd ditch the social share buttons at the bottom as most people will not give a crap about sharing the page at this point. You should ask them to do that on the form confirmation page as we discussed in part 6. Note that for paid search landing pages, it's often important to include a link to your privacy policy (in the footer) as a trust signal to the ad bots. It can sometimes give your Quality Score a boost.
- The CTA is bloody horrible. "Submit" is the single worst CTA copy you can have. It tells you nothing about what is going to happen when you click it. In this case it should be something like "Download my free Searchlight SEO platform product sheet".
- Ideally you'd be using a feature such as dynamic keyword insertion to pass the search keywords through to the page. You could change the headline to read something like this for a better match: "Out of the leading SEO research tools, leading marketers are making Searchlight their SEO platform of choice."
- For the form subhead, the request to fill in the form has zero value to your visitors. As we learned in part 3, you need to tell a story with your form design (as if it were the only element on the page). This subhead content could be used to add an extra benefit statement about what you'll get from reading this product sheet.
And, we're done! Feel smarter?
Thanks for reading all the way to the end! I hope you found this guide helpful and entertaining. Learning should be fun after all.
To recap what we've learned:
- As attention ratio goes down, conversion rates go up.
- The stronger the coupling between ad (or any link really) and the landing page it takes you to, the more likely your visitor will be to understand they are in the right place and stick around as a result.
- Context is one of the most powerful ways to create an experience that will convert your visitors into customers. Start a conversation before the click and continue it after the click in a personal way.
- If you need to show an image/photo of your offering, try to show it being used in practice to show context of use.
- For lead gen landing pages, you can design the form as a standalone unit by ensuring it has 6 elements that tell a complete story around your offering. And form love can be a real thing.
- The copy on your page is essential to the success of your campaigns, and you should focus the majority of your time on crafting a compelling headline and an actionable CTA that inspires a click.
- Remove incongruent words from your page. Particularly when placed close to your CTA. Words like "spam", "gimmicks" can be detrimental to your conversion rates.
- Design is more than the visual treatment of your landing page, it's about creating an experience that focuses attention on the goal of your page.
- Persuasive design will illuminate your failings as a copywriter, which is a good thing.
- Always ask for a second conversion on your confirmation pages.
- It's okay to have multiples CTAs only when the page goal is exactly the same for each.
- Take a walk through your own ad to landing page experiences and give yourself an honest critique.
Phewf! I'll leave you with a short story to round out our time together.
I was walking down St. Catherine Street in Montreal (my new home) a few weeks ago, when a man came running up to me, sweating and out of breath.
He stopped and said, "Can you help me!?"
"Sure, what do you need?"
"Do you know ANYWHERE I can get really good chicken right now?!"
Definitely one of the more bizarre requests I've had.
If you think about it, this is the real world equivalent of a search query. Now it was up to me to provide a landing experience that solved his problem. I could do this in one of two ways:
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"If you go three blocks that way (pointing), then go up 4 and a half blocks, you'll see a Portuguese place on the right side of the street which has the absolute best chicken in the city."
That's a delightful experience, and most likely a customer for life.
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"There's a KFC about 9 miles across town. But it's closed."
That's utterly useless. First I didn't give him specific enough directions to be helpful, and I ignored a crucial part of his search query. Urgency. Sending someone to a result that can't result in a conversion is a waste of their time. If I can't get immediate access to chicken (akin to same-day flower delivery), then I'm going to leave.
#truestory
Alrighty, if you've followed along closely, I'll see you on the other side of more delightful and high-converting landing page experiences. If you feel like sharing some examples from your own marketing in the comments I'd love to discuss them.
Cheers,
Oli
This is an ebook. That's what it is. Great stuff Oli, something that absolutely everyone can use - don't mind if I throw this in everyone's face.
Additionally - someone send out a PSA stating that there is no need for anyone to produce any more content on landing page optimization. That will be all.
Haha. Thanks Avtar. Love the PSA idea :)
To the person who says it is too long: it is only too long if you don't need CRO advice. If you do on the other hand, this is awesome.
@ Oli Thanks for a great post. I can't wait to be super clever to people who are designing a landing page and do things wrong..... *lauging evil* I noticed that beside the flower thing, the post doesn't focus on ecommerce but more on lead generation. Is there a specific reason for that? (Anyhow I'm sure I can use it for sales landing pages too, just wondering.)
Hi Ektor,
Glad you liked it! Ecommerce is a whole other beast and would've made the post long ;)
Here's an ebook about ecomm landing pages I wrote for HubSpot 5 months ago:Â https://cdn2.hubspot.net/hub/53/file-395601488-pdf/...
Cheers
Oli
Haven't read article yet, but nice clickbait with that title! Haven't seen that format much, a refreshing change from "The Ultimate…" or "A Comprehensive…"
Agreed! The concept is around great landing pages and grabbing attention. I think he nailed it from the very start (title) to the very end.
*stands up* *applauds*
I've never really paid attention to CRO until now. Going to get stuck into creating some landing pages :-)
Now that's what I like to hear! Learning should be fun, so I'm glad I could help catch your interest Ross.
Wow, this is one of the best articles on CRO and LPO I've ever read. Thanks so much for this information, can't wait to get my hands dirty and start using it!Â
Woah! This post has some of the best information on CRO I've seen in a long time. It definitely breaks the whole concept down into much easier to digest and easier to understand details.Â
Time to print this off and add it to my resources drawer.Â
So I like paper copies of digital content. Nobody is judging me.....surely?
You know you can still read digitally in the bathroom right? ;)
Glad you found it useful Peter.
Great stuff, Oli.
Not only did you deliver on the "entertaining" promise, but the post was legitimately useful.
I especially liked the part about NOT sending PPC traffic to your homepage. It's something that (as you noted with an example) bears repeating. It's kind of like in the SEO world where -- after 15 years since Google started -- people still set their homepage title tag to "home". #facepalm
Back in the day I'd feel bad for the advertiser when I clicked on an Adwords and landed on their homepage. I'd be like "that's a shame". Now, thanks to guys like you and Peep, CRO best practices are readily available. So there's no excuse for not following that best practice (and the others that you outlined in the post).
It's shocking how many people are doing it wrong. My hope is that the more people read posts like this, the more the trend will swing towards landing experiences that are actually useful.
If even 5% of marketers would change their thinking the post-click world would be a lot more enjoyable for all.
Thanks for reading Brian.
This is an excellent stuff. I just launched my new website few weeks ago. This post is going to help me a lot in getting more conversions. I have got every answer that was arriving in my mind regarding on page optimization. I am so happy that few of the rules are there, which I am already following.Â
Oli, thanks for the wonderful post -- it's definitely going into my CRO bookmarks as a must-remember future reference! And, yes, it was entertaining. :)
Great! Glad you liked it Samuel.
This was brilliant. I laughed out loud 4 times. I learned a lot. And I'm now 5% cooler than I was this morning. So... do I get an MBA now, or something?
You get an NDA. You cannot use those jokes without my permission :)
Thanks Hannah
Oli,
This is probably the best article on this topic I've ever read. We're in the process of doing a redesign, so I'm going to be sure to pass this along to everyone in my group so they can read it and hopefully live by it.
One thing I'd really love is an article that goes into this kind of detail specifically for ecommerce sites. You do touch upon it, but there isn't much information out there for sites with many products & categories of products. Our conversion rate is pretty terrible at the moment, but a lot of the information here assumes a single product landing page, and I'm having a hard time making the leap to apply this to my pages. Amazing job here though, I'll be using as much info from this article as possible.
Thank you!
You're not the first person to ask about ecommerce (which isn't really my forte), but I'll definitely consider digging deeper into it in the future. Really glad you liked it so much, and good luck with the redesign!
Awesome post, Oil. The post was long enough to do a good job of explaining (and showing!) what you mean. Besides, the entertaining factor still made it a fun read :)
I found it so good that you pointed out to not use words that could trigger negative connotations like "spam". So many websites are using this without any thought other than: "Everyone is doing it, so it must be right!". Great point, it goes to show that the majority is not always right!
Absolutely. And the beauty of it is that it's only becoming apparent through some very clever testing. You'd never imagine that *trying* to add trust signals would be detrimental, but apparently there's a right way and a wrong way.
Long post, yeap.
But it is worth it.
Awesome Oli! A blueprint for landing pages no less.
I guess you weren't kidding! As a noob in the industry, articles like this are extremely helpful.Â
Consider yourself bookmarked!
To optimization the landing page is one of the most highly important phase in current trends. Implement the CRO is the main thing in current market-scenario.
Loved this article, Oli. Very interesting throughout. I think where a lot of people fail in relation to conversion coupling is two-fold. A: Copywriters don't want to write the obvious ad (I can admit that b/c I'm a copywriter) and B: clients/brands aren't willing to create multiple different landing pages.
So, what happens is there are a handful of ads tested against each other (one is always the conversion coupling option), the winner gets used more often, the losers discarded. However, we test ads against each other instead of testing complete experiences. What we need to consider are that landing pages are not set in stone. My advice is always to use PPC to test messages that resonate well. Then thread those messages throughout your landing page.
I'm glad you got to this a bit in the article, but would like to hear more on this idea.
In that case you'd want to use Dynamic Keyword Replacement so that you can achieve strong coupling from many ads to a single page. Check this out: https://get.unbounce.com/dynamic-text-replacement/
Sorry for the plug, but it's an awesome feature.
Too bad you can't do that for organic landing pages :(
Man that would be cool!
Long, yep. Good, yep. Funny, yep. Gimmicks, nope. Thanks Oli
What a masterpiece of a guide! I just built a landing page for a client based on this guide and doubled conversion rate. You're a legend. Cheers. :-)
Wow, that's awesome Paul! Way to go.Â
Awesome, very comprehensive and worth the read.
Not only was this the most entertaining guide to landing page optimization I have ever read... it was the most helpful and inspiring one as well. I'm so ready to build some kick-butt landing pages! Thanks :)
Thanks Crystal! Go forth and kick landing page butt!
Entertaining - Check!
Informative - Check!
Actual LPO advice that comes only in rare occasions but usually in short bursts but this time around has a ton of them and can actually be implemented if you're doing CRO and LPO - Check!
TL;DR for the article - It's not long, DO NOT not read.
ha, nice double negatives. happy you got some serious value from the post G.
Hey Oil - I see you're really into eBooks (for good reason) but, I would like to get your opinion on his post I just did about private content over eBooks https://hiandrewgale.com/private-content-new-ebook-growth-hack/ . Great post BTW my developer sent me it, wasn't expecting that!
Interesting approach. I tend to look at big content as having one of two purposes: brand exposure or lead gen.Â
I prefer to balance it for maximum value.
Lead gen has obvious benefits, but ungated web content has much greater potential for getting shared and written about. You're mixing the two of them which is super interesting.
I'd love to know if you have any conversion stats about your approach vs. doing it as an ebook..
Thanks for sharing the technique, I might steal that idea :)
Thanks for the reply!
 I would be honored if you stole it and made it popular :P
I don't have enough traffic to test it yet or I would ... My blog is mainly just to post new ideas I am hoping people like you will try out and test for me :)
You could even mix it up with eBooks and say sign up and get access to our private library of ebooks and have like 5 ebooks that all normally convert well.Â
Now instead of just marketing one, you have a selection of 5 and it gives you 4 more chances to convert that customer with an eBook that he finds valuable.
ps - check out my verify e-mail growth hack too!
So I guess you sent him to the Portuguese chicken shack, right? * just proving that I read the whole thing ;) *
I think this is the longest post I've ever read, and it took me quite a while to read it all. But it was totally worth it!Â
There was nothing really "new" but going through this experience (yep, this was not a regular post) looking at the examples and re-thinking every element you described, I realized the unbelievable number of mistakes that I'm still doing even though I think I know all the "rules" for optimization... thanks for making me a humbler marketeer!
Cheers
Michel
Thanks for making it all the way through! It is indeed a beast. Glad it could re-pluck a few strings for ya.Â
I didn't actually have an answer for him (I was too green at the time) - but I'll check that out :)
Wow Oli, this is such good information there and written in a way we can’t forget ! It is related to a book I am reading right now: « Why Some Ideas Survive and Others Die : MADE TO STICK » by Chip Heath and Dan Heath. You definitely found a way to make the information stick to my mind while I was reading your article.
Creating landing pages that convert, because they have the right headline, are clear, are well designed, have the right attention ratio and communicate effectively with your audience is something every entrepreneur should focus on !
I wanted to take your information a step further. Unfortunately, not all businesses use landing pages. Therefore, they are not asking people to enter at least their emails in exchange of a bribe (free trial, free report, audio, ebook, etc.). Asking people’s information is the entry to being able to interact with them, getting to know them better and develop a relationship with them. Plus, of course, it gives you the opportunity to market to them.
I remember when I started with my online presence, I did not even know about the existence of landing pages. But when I discovered it… It made a tremendous change in my business.
Thanks for your great article!
There's definitely a different approach to be taken when you're not doing lead gen, although as content marketing is such a massive component of marketing right now I think there is a big transition underway.Â
This is my first post response to anything on Moz, and I just wanted to say this information really helped me understand about landing page optimization. I'm still learning about this digital marketing/online marketing world and all of its nuances. This guide, to me, read cleanly, entertainingly and I enjoyed it. As a writer, I'll give this two thumbs up (a tip of my cap to Roger Ebert).
Really happy you found it so useful, and that it inspired you to comment for the first time!
Haha, I'll take the two thumbs up for sure.
It truly is the most entertaining guide to landing pages! lol
My scrollin finger in numb! Oli, awesome CRO guide and the humor was much appreciated. Many Thanks
Always good to get a workout :)
Entertaining is the right work - amazing guide.
One big question - how do you know when to present an "ebook" or "download" as the CTA and when do you present the product itself? Is it mostly determined by the ad query and whether it's more informational or more transactional?
Thanks!
They're two very different things.
As part of a content marketing strategy, you would need to work your way down the funnel.
An example would be this:
That's the content marketing funnel progression.
You can also be doing PPC etc. directly for signups for your product which would use a landing page to provide the simplest possible explanation of what your product does and why it's beneficial - with a short signup form or a click-through to your pricing page.
Hope that helps.
Great post etc etc etc...
A great follow on post would be about your main page and how to make it a conversion tool without it being an wham bang in your face stinking slightly of conversion.
I had this revelation in my website design business the other day where I started telling all my clients "your website page isn't there to make you feel good it is to ultimately make you CASH"  The length of time that this page actually results in the kaching varies wildly (cruise liner versus bag of pretzels) but too many people think the job of a website is to make people feel warm and fuzzy.
It has to be both if you sell warm and fuzzy I think.
Another mistake I see is where clients think the visitor would actually care about them.  Its Me, Me, Me on the web.
Hey Oli,
Well I couldn't say anything about this most detailed, comprehensive, well-crafted and precious piece about the Landing pages that I've ever read. Hats off to you for the efforts!! :)
I just like to ask you how do you react, if I use separate landing page that is actually a one page template design (like the most of current websites building on HTML5 and CSS3) for my campaigns just to grab and keep the attention of visitor till the end. Will it be a good idea?
Thanks again for the exceptional read.
Thanks Umar.
Do you mean a long page with scrolling nav at the top?
It's not ideal for a campaign, but definitely better than a standard website as it keeps people on the page. However, you'll still have too much generic "brand central station" information that's got nothing to do with your marketing campaign.Â
This is the experience you want to give people from organic search traffic, but not a PPC, email, social, display campaign.
Make sense?
You're right. Thank you for your valued answer. :)Â
Nice post Oli, thanks a lot for posting this up.. This is really a useful guide on how to create an awesome landing page.. I really liked it very much.. little lengthy but very very informative..
Keep up the good work... Looking forward for more of such articles...
Right on point, well done! Not only was it entertaining but the post provides very informative techniques to help produce conversions.
Awesome post on Landing Page optimization, You post title was so appealing "The Most Entertaining Guide to Landing Page Optimization You'll Ever Read"
I agreed; This is the best and longest post on Landing page optimization ever. The attention ration is an important metrics and we all should keep it 1:1 the key to get more conversions through your landing page is to have only one call to action button for user and remove all other navigation links from landing page. The less option users have the more clicks you get on your target page.
Well done, you delivered on the promise of entertainment while also being highly informative. Thank you.Â
My pleasure Justin. Edutainment is my goal.
Great post! I agree entirely that an adwords backed landing page can do wonders, I'm running a couple right now actually.
One super quick thing to note - Intuit didn't actually cram their name and Quickbase in there, with a character limit of 25, they were forced to shorten management into mgmt. Google tends to pop extra things on the end of ad titles, up until this point I thought it was due to the hooking up of Google+ and Adwords but now I'm not so sure..
Ahh, good point re shortening. I'd raise my big for 3 extra characters :)
What an awesome piece. Seriously. I don't know a damn thing about SEO or CRO and this literally just changed my entire outlook on landing pages completely. Sure, it took me 3 days to read, in between twitter, soundcloud and facebook, but it was so worth it.Â
Thanks!Â
Way to stick with it! It really is worth your time to even implement Attention Ratio to any marketing campaigns you're doing. It's the best place to start and the most fundamental reason for failed campaigns.
Fantastic read Oli,
This is one of the best posts on landing page design because it helped explain the "why" behind good landing page design. It's not just about having an obnoxiously large button. And it's not just about having a CTA. It's about how all of those elements work together to captivate, engage, and focus user action.
And I will totally be using your peacock metaphor... great example!
Of course, this post is a marathon, and not a sprint, but well worth the read. Thanks!
Thanks Josh. Peacocks are bad business. Definitely a post to come back to more than once.
"Never feed your marketing traffic to a peacock, unless you've poked his eyes out." You ought to have put a tweet button next to this one too! That alone is worth a chapter that others need in a book. Never distract your customers. There's actually this joke amongst salesmen in the sixties. This client wants to buy that new Citroen 2CV. That version still had a lever you could manually start it with. the prospect has already sent all the buying signals. But the sales rep. cannot help "close his sale" with this: "Now, hang on, one last thing: if it should ever fail to start electrically, you can use this lever and do it manually like this ..." Customer scratches his head "fail to start? Hm." Let me see another model ...
haha, yeah that's a great example of the incongruent words (like spam and gimmicks). I had a friend with one of those cars back in University (showing my ages!) - crazy gear stick too.
Loved the Contrast not Color point. You don't know how many times I've gone back and forth with others about the best color for conversions. But now it makes sense. Not color, but contrast. I have ammo next time that comes up!!
It's also worth thinking about demographics too. About 8% of men are colour blind, so the contrast can be even more important there (not just colour contrast, but black to white).
Ebook. That's what it is. Great stuff Oli, something that absolutely everyone can use
"Never feed your marketing traffic to a peacock"
Thanks for an excellent resource! As Samuel Scott said, I have this bookmarked as a great CRO resource!
Another helpful tool for optimizing is mouse listeners - it's a java script that lets you find out what users mice are up to on your page - can be good if your really into analytical data. That has to be the most in depth post on landing page in some time and not so long ago I'm sure it would have been called "the ultimate guide to.."!
Finally if in doubt you can always try a split test which can be great for in office betting of which LP will win!
Thanks for taking the time to write it.
Testing is the key to all things LPO/CRO. I didn't get into depth on the mechanics of testing here, but for anyone curious about how to approach A/B testing and what to test, the course I mentioned in the post is a great place to start. https://thelandingpagecourse.com/landing-page-optimization-process-a-b-testing/
That was actually an entertaining guide for landing page optimization!! Thanks for sharing this kind of stuff Oli Gardner. I would also like to add my contribution which i found on google while searching for the same topic and i hope you would find it useful too: https://blog.abtasty.com/en/4-guidelines-to-optimize-conversion-rates-on-landing-pages. Will be waiting to see your feedback on this one ;) Have great day!!
lovely writing, i think that the main idea is
1- make it simple
2- make it audience specific
all simple to say, but as always hard todo.
I can see a few comments related to length, and to be honest, it's lengthy and has cheesy jokes from time to time, but I loved the read.
Nice, thorough, engaging and informative. And I really like your naming :)
I have spent one month designing a new landing page for my blog and had reached an deadlock Reading this guide has been a true revelation. I wish I had found it sooner !!
Funny. Im neww to this. When i read your blog then deleted the extra eye blinding elements on my landing page, i got a conversion and made money- on the first shot! I'm down.
Thank you so much for posting it is appreciated!!! I for one was glad it was long it's just what I needed
Despite the post is over 1 year old, it is still very up to date and insightful. Not surprisingly, as Oli and Unbounce are household names for landing page optimisation.
In the post, Qualaroo is mentioned for running surveys. Alternatively, Insitez can be used. A great feature is setting up a 'leave intent' survey, that is automatically displayed just before the visitor leaves the page or closes the window. This can shine a new light on the page setup, wording and design.
That's right, it's long, but it is also very comprehensive. For me it has the value of an ebook.
It shows all aspects of landing page optimization.
VIDEO vs. DISTRACTIONÂ
How about that trends where we all try to use animated video on home page to introduce website products and services? It is very tricky to find the perfect place, button and way to use it.
Hands down to Oli for giving such great stuff here. The moment I finished reading the post I instantly and literally reread the whole article once again and taking important points on how i can revamp my whole landing page. I am a copywriter and the information you just shared with me really helps. Thanks :)
Love it! thanks for taking your valuable time Mary.
Amazing post Oli,Â
Bit long post 'eBook' but a great info on CRO. Help to design a better landing page for high conversion and running every campaigns must have a 'call to action' in services and product domains.
But I'd like to ask how to works, when I have a bootstrap single page design with multi tabs?
Like a microsite? Or a single page with a nav at the top that scrolls down the page or remains there at all times?
Oli Gardner Great Guide Ever !! Some of your ideas very good some of them are basics !! the sites you mentioned are just created for links and external links  you provided are all beneficial great hilarious (in sense of humor ) work!! You have covered all the Areas for good and basics landing page optimization i will like to read the technical version of this what can be good image size etc and with most landing page issues with high responsive websites
Awesome guide. Kudos for making conversion optimization an interesting subject. Being knee deep in a site revamp I appreciate the insight. Great stuff
Mark
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It's so important yet with most things, often very dry (although nowhere near as dull as PPC :)
I was gonna comment on this post,
But then the form to register was so long I decided not to
And then I changed my mind and decided to do it anyway.
And then it was getting hard to get thru the steps so I gave up
But then I ended up plowing through it.
Good post man, will keep it bookmarked for reference. Thanks for sharing the love.
haha, well thanks for going the extra mile!
Wow, if this shows what you wanna tell about what you know, I can't imagine what you aren't telling!Â
I can only say thanks.
First, amazing and timely article.  Love the idea of asking for more once someone has expressed a willingness to give some info; will star using that immediately. One question though, as a consumer, if I hit a landing page with a 1:1 ratio I get frustrated - I don't like not having an option to get to the main website to explore the product/service on my own terms. Would you say that a 2:1 ratio with one link being the CTA and the other being to the home page is acceptable? The context is landing pages for a PPC campaign (branded terms as well as keyword based terms).
You can obviously test having a clickable logo so people can visit your site, but it depends on the goal of the campaign. If it's brand awareness then that might be a good next step - perhaps even at the end of the page. But for a specific campaign, you'll lose more than you'll gain by letting people wander.
One problem is being able to attribute the people leaving the landing page to actual signups so you can aggregate the on page conversion and the subsequent site visit conversion. If you can set up the analytics to be measurable then it'd be worth a test.
Thanks for the feedback; that makes sense. I should be able to get the analytics setup to A/B test it. I'll post the results if they're noteworthy!
Great article Oli, great stuff. I have always been annoyed at how my search results never match the landing page at all. I am on the verge of starting my own start-up  soon, will definitely make sure to incorporate your advice.Â
Wouldn't it be wonderful if all marketers simultaneously shifted to creating matched experiences! I think people would click on more ads simply because they would start to learn that advertising doesn't need to be evil.
You almost lost me at the Robbie Williams image, but glad I kept reading. No regrets.;)
Very entertaining & a good read, however you were not a math major, were you? :D
Uplift of 120 NTS (New Trials) / month x 12 month x $706 CLV/customer = $ 1MM / year?
What you're saying is that every new trial signup will result in that person becoming a paying customer - you may be good, but not this good.Â
Other than that - enjoyed the article.
Haha. I wasn't clear enough in the description about the CLV number. $706 is the average value of a customer *after* churn and a/c cancellations are taken into account. The CLV is higher than $706 but that's the number after all adjustments have been applied.
Make sense?
Perhaps this is the only guide a marketers need to read and the best aspect of this guide is that it is 100% practical and hence can be implemented on almost every kind of websites.
Thanks Oli for such detailed and informative article. How many hours did you take to write this "Landing page optimization" e-book for us?
omg you really don't want to know how long I worked on this ;)
This post is too long. How about sticking to the point! Does a post really need to be this long?
It's long, but it has been well-received by people both in the Moz community and in the greater web community. The stats at https://moz.com/blog/most-entertaining-guide-to-landing-page-optimization/stats show some of the information of traffic sources, time on site, bounce rate, etc. It's also done quite well on Hacker News (https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=7779186).
This is tooo long. It has a lot of useful info and I mean a lot, but you lost my interest somewhere along the way, sorry.
I guess you hadn't seen my last MOZ post :)Â
https://moz.com/blog/the-noob-guide-to-online-marketing-with-giant-infographic-11928
I saw the infographic some where else a long time ago really well done it was great too! Just shows it must of worked if i saw it elsewhere too!